#con of asshole: would this ballet maestro really say that
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sometimes writing erotica is great and sexy, sometimes it's a twenty minute discussion as to whether this character would use the word "asshole", "ass", "anus", or "rectum"
#writing talk#pro of asshole: shocking! sexy for the sudden perverseness!#con of asshole: would this ballet maestro really say that?#pro of ass: more likely to be said by this ballet maestro!#con of ass: not as shocking#pro of anus: it's not any of the other words#con of anus: too scientific#pro of rectum: could possibly be used by this guy and might be unfamiliar to the character#con of rectum: If I have to consistently use rectum I'll burn the book#factors to also consider: as written the main character does not immediately recognize what this guy says#and so he. demonstrates.#but what word is a ballerina (who does some sex work among Russian and a handful of central asian elite) not going to recognize#dgg research#I may come up with a new tag for that because I'm ready to start talking about the characters#dgg talk
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